I like what you have done.............A good hard-tail, (in my mind), is about angles and balance. Sissy bay is the same angle as the forks, front guard mounts balance the top rail of the hard-tail as does the sight gauge on tank, (close enough), would like to have seen a little more angle. Seat looks comphy and the colours are great, the large front guard on the 21" rim balances the rear with the tank size in the middle.
2 things i would change,
1; The rear brake pivot point, ( i understand there is a clearance issue and do not have an answer for a change), to be effective and less force required to actuate the pivot the bottom connection, from front rod. The lever on the pivot should be longer, (think how easier it is to use a long bar when tightening/loosening a large nut or seized one), and this bar is pushing so less stress is better to stop any chance it will bend. The top one going to the rear doesn't need to be long and because it is pulling, there is less stress on the rod.
2; Those Sharpe points on the end of the front sets will cause major damage to cloths skin and mussel. Not a matter of if it's when it will happen.
Front brake has been addressed..............the 2 minuses are far exceeded by the overall build..............
2 things i would change,
1; The rear brake pivot point, ( i understand there is a clearance issue and do not have an answer for a change), to be effective and less force required to actuate the pivot the bottom connection, from front rod. The lever on the pivot should be longer, (think how easier it is to use a long bar when tightening/loosening a large nut or seized one), and this bar is pushing so less stress is better to stop any chance it will bend. The top one going to the rear doesn't need to be long and because it is pulling, there is less stress on the rod.
2; Those Sharpe points on the end of the front sets will cause major damage to cloths skin and mussel. Not a matter of if it's when it will happen.
Front brake has been addressed..............the 2 minuses are far exceeded by the overall build..............