Let's not hear anybody bad mouthing Harbor Freight welders again. Tell them it's their skills that are lacking.
The only problem considering where you're trying to go is in the headlight arrangement. It looks too much like a fender adapted to that purpose. It looks better in the last pic because it looks less like that. It wouldn't take much change to fix it.
I have to agree with Pete. It needs a rear suspension. Otherwise I think it's like an easy way out instead of the achievement it could be. A futuristic bike will have a rear suspension - guaranteed
A damn good rear suspension.