Okay, you've got equidistant legs from swingarm pivot to the shock mounts, which will give the stiffest suspension. You're getting the idea. The suspension travel is linear with the shock compression, and the suspension's spring rate can be found using the leverage ratio (force multiplier mentioned above).
Now, if you wanted the loop lower and the shock more inline with the backbone like in your original pic, that could be done with more *math*. You would need to plot a chart of the diminishing leverage, multiplied against the shock's increasing spring force to get the true spring rate. It would be a softer suspension, but playing with spring rates and the geometry can give you something that may work for you.
This is a good project for a spreadsheet...
Now, if you wanted the loop lower and the shock more inline with the backbone like in your original pic, that could be done with more *math*. You would need to plot a chart of the diminishing leverage, multiplied against the shock's increasing spring force to get the true spring rate. It would be a softer suspension, but playing with spring rates and the geometry can give you something that may work for you.
This is a good project for a spreadsheet...